Implementing a history of user action for a calculator
I decided to make a calculator as a project. Implementing basic addition, subtraction, division, and multiplication was fairly easy.
I wanted to add more functionality so I decided to implement a list of results the user view. However, I had a difficult time keeping track of the results numerically. I wrote a maze of if statements that are functional but seem to be overwrought with code. I am sure there is a better way to handle this. Any advice?
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
def div(x, y):
value = None
while True:
try:
value = x / y
break
except ZeroDivisionError:
print('Value is not dividable by 0, try again')
break
return value
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
def get_two_val():
x, y = num_input(), num_input()
return x, y
print("Welcome to Simple Calc")
# declaration of variables
num_of_calc_counter = 0
index_of_calc = 1
calculations =
while True:
print("Choose from the following options:")
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
usrChoice = num_input('Enter your choice: ')
'''
Menu workflow
options 1-4 take in two numbers and perform the specified calculation and
then add the result to a master list that the user can reference later.
lastly, the workflow increments the num_of_calc variable by 1 for recent
calc logic
option 5 is a simple tax calculator that needs work or option to enter
or find tax rate
option 6 returns a list of all the calculations perform by the user
'''
if usrChoice is 1:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = add(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "plus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 2:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = sub(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "minus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 3:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = mul(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "times", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 4:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = div(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "divided by", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 5:
tax_rate = .0875
price = float(input("What is the price?: "))
total_tax = tax_rate * price
final_amount = total_tax + price
print('Tax rate: ', tax_rate, '%')
print('Sales tax: $', total_tax)
print('_____________________________')
print('Final amount: $', final_amount)
#
elif usrChoice is 6:
if len(calculations) is 0:
print('There are no calculations')
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 0:
break
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I decided to make a calculator as a project. Implementing basic addition, subtraction, division, and multiplication was fairly easy.
I wanted to add more functionality so I decided to implement a list of results the user view. However, I had a difficult time keeping track of the results numerically. I wrote a maze of if statements that are functional but seem to be overwrought with code. I am sure there is a better way to handle this. Any advice?
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
def div(x, y):
value = None
while True:
try:
value = x / y
break
except ZeroDivisionError:
print('Value is not dividable by 0, try again')
break
return value
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
def get_two_val():
x, y = num_input(), num_input()
return x, y
print("Welcome to Simple Calc")
# declaration of variables
num_of_calc_counter = 0
index_of_calc = 1
calculations =
while True:
print("Choose from the following options:")
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
usrChoice = num_input('Enter your choice: ')
'''
Menu workflow
options 1-4 take in two numbers and perform the specified calculation and
then add the result to a master list that the user can reference later.
lastly, the workflow increments the num_of_calc variable by 1 for recent
calc logic
option 5 is a simple tax calculator that needs work or option to enter
or find tax rate
option 6 returns a list of all the calculations perform by the user
'''
if usrChoice is 1:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = add(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "plus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 2:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = sub(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "minus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 3:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = mul(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "times", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 4:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = div(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "divided by", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 5:
tax_rate = .0875
price = float(input("What is the price?: "))
total_tax = tax_rate * price
final_amount = total_tax + price
print('Tax rate: ', tax_rate, '%')
print('Sales tax: $', total_tax)
print('_____________________________')
print('Final amount: $', final_amount)
#
elif usrChoice is 6:
if len(calculations) is 0:
print('There are no calculations')
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 0:
break
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Sales tax calculations are excluded from the history? Why?
– 200_success
6 hours ago
1
I disagree with that close vote - this seems on-topic to me. The OP describes it as being functional.
– Reinderien
5 hours ago
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I decided to make a calculator as a project. Implementing basic addition, subtraction, division, and multiplication was fairly easy.
I wanted to add more functionality so I decided to implement a list of results the user view. However, I had a difficult time keeping track of the results numerically. I wrote a maze of if statements that are functional but seem to be overwrought with code. I am sure there is a better way to handle this. Any advice?
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
def div(x, y):
value = None
while True:
try:
value = x / y
break
except ZeroDivisionError:
print('Value is not dividable by 0, try again')
break
return value
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
def get_two_val():
x, y = num_input(), num_input()
return x, y
print("Welcome to Simple Calc")
# declaration of variables
num_of_calc_counter = 0
index_of_calc = 1
calculations =
while True:
print("Choose from the following options:")
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
usrChoice = num_input('Enter your choice: ')
'''
Menu workflow
options 1-4 take in two numbers and perform the specified calculation and
then add the result to a master list that the user can reference later.
lastly, the workflow increments the num_of_calc variable by 1 for recent
calc logic
option 5 is a simple tax calculator that needs work or option to enter
or find tax rate
option 6 returns a list of all the calculations perform by the user
'''
if usrChoice is 1:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = add(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "plus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 2:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = sub(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "minus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 3:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = mul(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "times", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 4:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = div(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "divided by", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 5:
tax_rate = .0875
price = float(input("What is the price?: "))
total_tax = tax_rate * price
final_amount = total_tax + price
print('Tax rate: ', tax_rate, '%')
print('Sales tax: $', total_tax)
print('_____________________________')
print('Final amount: $', final_amount)
#
elif usrChoice is 6:
if len(calculations) is 0:
print('There are no calculations')
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 0:
break
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I decided to make a calculator as a project. Implementing basic addition, subtraction, division, and multiplication was fairly easy.
I wanted to add more functionality so I decided to implement a list of results the user view. However, I had a difficult time keeping track of the results numerically. I wrote a maze of if statements that are functional but seem to be overwrought with code. I am sure there is a better way to handle this. Any advice?
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
def div(x, y):
value = None
while True:
try:
value = x / y
break
except ZeroDivisionError:
print('Value is not dividable by 0, try again')
break
return value
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
def get_two_val():
x, y = num_input(), num_input()
return x, y
print("Welcome to Simple Calc")
# declaration of variables
num_of_calc_counter = 0
index_of_calc = 1
calculations =
while True:
print("Choose from the following options:")
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
usrChoice = num_input('Enter your choice: ')
'''
Menu workflow
options 1-4 take in two numbers and perform the specified calculation and
then add the result to a master list that the user can reference later.
lastly, the workflow increments the num_of_calc variable by 1 for recent
calc logic
option 5 is a simple tax calculator that needs work or option to enter
or find tax rate
option 6 returns a list of all the calculations perform by the user
'''
if usrChoice is 1:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = add(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "plus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 2:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = sub(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "minus", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 3:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = mul(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "times", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 4:
numbers = get_two_val()
result = div(*numbers)
print(numbers[0], "divided by", numbers[1], "equals", result)
calculations.extend([result])
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 5:
tax_rate = .0875
price = float(input("What is the price?: "))
total_tax = tax_rate * price
final_amount = total_tax + price
print('Tax rate: ', tax_rate, '%')
print('Sales tax: $', total_tax)
print('_____________________________')
print('Final amount: $', final_amount)
#
elif usrChoice is 6:
if len(calculations) is 0:
print('There are no calculations')
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif usrChoice is 0:
break
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Sales tax calculations are excluded from the history? Why?
– 200_success
6 hours ago
1
I disagree with that close vote - this seems on-topic to me. The OP describes it as being functional.
– Reinderien
5 hours ago
add a comment |
Sales tax calculations are excluded from the history? Why?
– 200_success
6 hours ago
1
I disagree with that close vote - this seems on-topic to me. The OP describes it as being functional.
– Reinderien
5 hours ago
Sales tax calculations are excluded from the history? Why?
– 200_success
6 hours ago
Sales tax calculations are excluded from the history? Why?
– 200_success
6 hours ago
1
1
I disagree with that close vote - this seems on-topic to me. The OP describes it as being functional.
– Reinderien
5 hours ago
I disagree with that close vote - this seems on-topic to me. The OP describes it as being functional.
– Reinderien
5 hours ago
add a comment |
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Use the operator
package
This series of functions:
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
can go away entirely. (You can include div
too if you rework the way that exceptions are handled). Instead, use the operator package.
Early return
This:
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
doesn't need a break
. Replace the break
with a return
and delete the return outside of the loop.
Write a main
method
...to pull your code out of global scope.
Use more loops
This:
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
can be rewritten as a tuple:
menu_choices = (
('Add', do_add),
('Subtract', do_subtract),
# ...
)
The index of the outer tuple is the user input, the first element of the inner tuple is the menu item name, and the second element of the inner tuple is the name of a function you can call to execute the menu item feature. Then your input logic can be simplified to something like
print('Choose from the following options:')
print('n'.join('%2d. %s' % (i, name)
for i, (name, _) in enumerate(menu_choices)))
user_choice = num_input('Enter your choice:')
if 0 <= user_choice < len(menu_choices):
menu_choices[user_choice][1]()
Use append instead of extend
This:
calculations.extend([result])
should be
calculations.append(result)
Don't repeat yourself
These four blocks:
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
do the exact same thing! So just replace them all with one else
following your if len(calculations) == 0
.
Also, that first if
can be simplified to if not calculations
.
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Use the operator
package
This series of functions:
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
can go away entirely. (You can include div
too if you rework the way that exceptions are handled). Instead, use the operator package.
Early return
This:
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
doesn't need a break
. Replace the break
with a return
and delete the return outside of the loop.
Write a main
method
...to pull your code out of global scope.
Use more loops
This:
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
can be rewritten as a tuple:
menu_choices = (
('Add', do_add),
('Subtract', do_subtract),
# ...
)
The index of the outer tuple is the user input, the first element of the inner tuple is the menu item name, and the second element of the inner tuple is the name of a function you can call to execute the menu item feature. Then your input logic can be simplified to something like
print('Choose from the following options:')
print('n'.join('%2d. %s' % (i, name)
for i, (name, _) in enumerate(menu_choices)))
user_choice = num_input('Enter your choice:')
if 0 <= user_choice < len(menu_choices):
menu_choices[user_choice][1]()
Use append instead of extend
This:
calculations.extend([result])
should be
calculations.append(result)
Don't repeat yourself
These four blocks:
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
do the exact same thing! So just replace them all with one else
following your if len(calculations) == 0
.
Also, that first if
can be simplified to if not calculations
.
add a comment |
Use the operator
package
This series of functions:
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
can go away entirely. (You can include div
too if you rework the way that exceptions are handled). Instead, use the operator package.
Early return
This:
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
doesn't need a break
. Replace the break
with a return
and delete the return outside of the loop.
Write a main
method
...to pull your code out of global scope.
Use more loops
This:
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
can be rewritten as a tuple:
menu_choices = (
('Add', do_add),
('Subtract', do_subtract),
# ...
)
The index of the outer tuple is the user input, the first element of the inner tuple is the menu item name, and the second element of the inner tuple is the name of a function you can call to execute the menu item feature. Then your input logic can be simplified to something like
print('Choose from the following options:')
print('n'.join('%2d. %s' % (i, name)
for i, (name, _) in enumerate(menu_choices)))
user_choice = num_input('Enter your choice:')
if 0 <= user_choice < len(menu_choices):
menu_choices[user_choice][1]()
Use append instead of extend
This:
calculations.extend([result])
should be
calculations.append(result)
Don't repeat yourself
These four blocks:
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
do the exact same thing! So just replace them all with one else
following your if len(calculations) == 0
.
Also, that first if
can be simplified to if not calculations
.
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Use the operator
package
This series of functions:
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
can go away entirely. (You can include div
too if you rework the way that exceptions are handled). Instead, use the operator package.
Early return
This:
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
doesn't need a break
. Replace the break
with a return
and delete the return outside of the loop.
Write a main
method
...to pull your code out of global scope.
Use more loops
This:
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
can be rewritten as a tuple:
menu_choices = (
('Add', do_add),
('Subtract', do_subtract),
# ...
)
The index of the outer tuple is the user input, the first element of the inner tuple is the menu item name, and the second element of the inner tuple is the name of a function you can call to execute the menu item feature. Then your input logic can be simplified to something like
print('Choose from the following options:')
print('n'.join('%2d. %s' % (i, name)
for i, (name, _) in enumerate(menu_choices)))
user_choice = num_input('Enter your choice:')
if 0 <= user_choice < len(menu_choices):
menu_choices[user_choice][1]()
Use append instead of extend
This:
calculations.extend([result])
should be
calculations.append(result)
Don't repeat yourself
These four blocks:
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
do the exact same thing! So just replace them all with one else
following your if len(calculations) == 0
.
Also, that first if
can be simplified to if not calculations
.
Use the operator
package
This series of functions:
def add(x, y):
return x + y
def sub(x, y):
return x - y
def mul(x, y):
return x * y
can go away entirely. (You can include div
too if you rework the way that exceptions are handled). Instead, use the operator package.
Early return
This:
def num_input(prompt='Enter a number: '):
while True:
try:
print(prompt, end='')
x = int(input())
break
except ValueError:
print('You must input a number. Try again.')
return x
doesn't need a break
. Replace the break
with a return
and delete the return outside of the loop.
Write a main
method
...to pull your code out of global scope.
Use more loops
This:
print(" 1. Add")
print(" 2. Subtract")
print(" 3. Multiply")
print(" 4. Divide")
print(" 5. Sales Tax Calculator")
print(" 6. Recent Calculations")
print(" 0. Quit")
can be rewritten as a tuple:
menu_choices = (
('Add', do_add),
('Subtract', do_subtract),
# ...
)
The index of the outer tuple is the user input, the first element of the inner tuple is the menu item name, and the second element of the inner tuple is the name of a function you can call to execute the menu item feature. Then your input logic can be simplified to something like
print('Choose from the following options:')
print('n'.join('%2d. %s' % (i, name)
for i, (name, _) in enumerate(menu_choices)))
user_choice = num_input('Enter your choice:')
if 0 <= user_choice < len(menu_choices):
menu_choices[user_choice][1]()
Use append instead of extend
This:
calculations.extend([result])
should be
calculations.append(result)
Don't repeat yourself
These four blocks:
elif num_of_calc_counter == 0:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif index_of_calc == num_of_calc_counter:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
elif num_of_calc_counter > index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter -= 1
elif num_of_calc_counter < index_of_calc:
index_of_calc = 1
for i in calculations:
print(index_of_calc, i)
index_of_calc += 1
num_of_calc_counter += 1
do the exact same thing! So just replace them all with one else
following your if len(calculations) == 0
.
Also, that first if
can be simplified to if not calculations
.
answered 5 hours ago
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Sales tax calculations are excluded from the history? Why?
– 200_success
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I disagree with that close vote - this seems on-topic to me. The OP describes it as being functional.
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5 hours ago